Research Draft

In my draft I feel confident about my supporting facts. My facts are relevant and relate to my thesis overall. I think that the facts and examples I include will really get my argument across. 
Although I feel good about those things, I worry some about how I am not so sure how people could really argue against my thesis. Its an arguable thesis but at the same time its not. I don't know how people could argue that survivors of Buchenwald concentration camp weren't left with emotional scars that would impact them for the rest of their lives. 

My paper was a mix between easy and hard. Easy was deciding what subtopics to include in my paper. It also was easy to find the support to add to my subtopics. What was hard was making it all flow together between paragraphs. It also was kinda difficult to relate each subtopic back to my thesis in words. Also adding my citations was hard as well. 
From the writing center or from Dr. D, I would like help on changing how my paragraphs together; make it not so choppy.